Before and after Proofreading/Editing

Before (submitted by a third party)

A FREE concert to close off Cowapalooza weekend put on by several churches in the city and everyone is invited. Sunday August 20 @ 6:30pm, Southside Park. Ron Sexsmith has said: "Jacob Moon is an exceedingly gifted and watchable performer....seems completely at home on stage" and Danny Miranda (bassist for Queen*) concurs "Tremendous command of the instrument...amazing voice. I can honestly say that I am overwhelmed by his music".


After my edit 

 A FREE concert to close off Cowapolooza weekend put on by several churches in the city and everyone is invited. Sunday 20 August @ 6:30 p.m., Southside Park. Ron Sexsmith, Canadian singer-songwriter from St. Catharines, has said: "Jacob Moon is an exceedingly gifted and watchable performer ... seems completely at home on stage" and Danny Miranda (ex Blue Oyster Cult, bassist for Queen + Paul Rogers) concurs, "Tremendous command of the instrument ... amazing voice. I can honestly say that I am overwhelmed by his music".